너무 장황한데.

A : May I impose on you to check my essay?
B : Ten pages! 너무 장황한 것 같은데,, don’t you think?
A : I want to make sure I get my point across.
B : Yes, but the trick is to not belabor the main issue.

A : 내 에세이 좀 봐줄래?
B : 10페이지라니! That’s a bit wordy, 그렇지 않아?
A : 내 요지를 분명히 하고 싶어서.
B : 그래, 하지만 주제를 너무 상세히 논한다고 잘하는 건 아니야.

[Additional expressions]

* May I impose on you to
– May I ask you to / Would it be all right if I were to ask you to
* check my essay
– take a look at an essay I wrote / have a look-see at a paper I wrote
* That’s a bit wordy
– That seems quite long / It sounds like that’s a rather lengthy paper
* Don’t you think?
– Would you say? / Don’t you agree? / Don’t you think so?
* I want to make sure
– I’m trying to be certain that / It’s my intention that
* I get my point across.
– I make my point perfectly clear. / There is no doubt as to my opinion.
* the trick is to not
– the best method is to not / the key to making a good paper is not to
* belabor the main issue
– overstress your point / go on and on about your point until it gets boring